The crackle of Rip Van Winkle thunder then a strobe of flash lightning.
White rain blurring the buildings. Rumble overhead. Storm passing eastward.
The foto is the view from my window.
That is not a haiku
And neither are the first two
Haikus consist of two or more separate images. I think I achieved that. I went for 17 instead of 17, which I could cover up easily since I stutter of certain words, but I most assuredly failed on the 5/7/5 phasing, although the stutter could once more save me if I was eloquent.
It's all about nature.
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